Pizza Quest

I played through all of Pizza Quest and I LOVED it! I wasn't expecting such a funny game, the wifi gag seems like an inside joke but it was so cute how you kept calling back to it even in the magic skills.

Overall I want to congratulate you on such a well-rounded first game. You fit in a lot of mechanics and gameplay without overdoing anything. Implementing puzzles (I don’t even know how to do some of those lol), timers, balancing the fights, there is a lot you had to learn.

There is a lot of attention to detail I really appreciated. I tried to walk back to previous areas or places I wasn’t supposed to go to yet, and you always accounted for that with the main character saying things like “We have to go to work first”, ect…

And I loved how you implemented your art in the background, sprites, and busts. I particularly liked how you did the light from the windows in the castle hitting the floor. That was a nice bit of ambience.

Honestly I was pretty bad at the pizza art puzzle. I had to reload my save a lot before I realized it’s easier than it looks😂

I don’t have much critique to give you, I’m just impressed that this is your first game and you did so many cool gameplay and art ideas in such a short time. If I could say one thing it might be to check for typos and sentence flow. Sometimes the sentences ran on a bit too much or were difficult to read at first. Following and I’d love to see what kinds of games you make in the future!

(reposting from my review because I didn't realize reviews are private lol)